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Forgetting you will be hard, I knew it from the start.
Everywhere I look now, I see your face in my mind,
I tried to move on, tried to sleep..
But the sound of your voice is haunting me.
I found out the truth of what you really are,
I tried so hard to get so far.
Finally figured out your crazy game.
You left me hurting in pain,
But how can you move on, for our love was so strong.
You were the one who after i chased,
How can i not cry, knowing i'm being replaced.
I guess I wont chase you anymore
cuz you can clearly see what you lost.
We're done, I cant believe how much I will miss you
But I will always remember all the times I spent with you.
Those were some of the best times of my life,
But you hurt me deep, and i'm sitting here trying to move on.
its so hard since you’ve been on my mind from the start.
I’ll always remember you and those sweet memories.
I gave you my heart, a part of me I knew you could break.
you tore us apart when i didn't knew it.
even though im nothing to you, like i dont belong anymore.
its your absence i can no longer stand.
but i'll be okay.

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- from my friend, Melanie A.
June 9/09 11:50 pm
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Author's Comments

Damn i felt exactly same way about my exbf! Forgetting about him was so hard cus i know he still there in Earth. My friend created by her own idea and i was impressed about her poetry. I did asked her permission to allow me to use her poetry to show you everyone if you felt same about this peom!

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:iconjanepopsicle:
your friend, a talent.
I love this.

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Jane
:iconflarb1234:
wowz well its good either way so cool wahoo congraysts yoru friend yadda yadda yadda you know the rest...

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i am devine chaos
:iconluckyangellady:
thanks! Yeah my friend is great talent! but i feel bad for her cus her exbf break off and hurt her heart. Ahhh i hope she'll be here after school when i visit there!

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I may be still living in nightmare of hell but i shall fight harder until my eyes and body are bleeth to death. No matter how pain or hard is it, but just die trying! Being artist heroine is worth for.
:iconluckyangellady:
lol ^^; thanks! yeah she's really good at making poetry and im very touch but feel bad for her from broken relatoinship

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I may be still living in nightmare of hell but i shall fight harder until my eyes and body are bleeth to death. No matter how pain or hard is it, but just die trying! Being artist heroine is worth for.
:iconjanepopsicle:
I hope she feels better soon. I'm sorry about the ex boyfriend :(

Do send my regards. Though i hardly even know both of you. :P

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Jane
:iconflarb1234:
yeah im nto oen to really let human emotions get to me but yeah but sorry that happened to her.

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i am devine chaos
:iconluckyangellady:
sure i'll will tell her for you. :)

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I may be still living in nightmare of hell but i shall fight harder until my eyes and body are bleeth to death. No matter how pain or hard is it, but just die trying! Being artist heroine is worth for.
:iconluckyangellady:
yeah

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I may be still living in nightmare of hell but i shall fight harder until my eyes and body are bleeth to death. No matter how pain or hard is it, but just die trying! Being artist heroine is worth for.
:iconjanepopsicle:
that would be delightful.

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Jane

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